by Fiona Humberstone on September 13, 2009 · 0 comments
The sad truth is that most business writing fails to pull a response. Often it's self absorbed: focusing too much on the company's history and 'benefits' rather than what the client really needs. Sometimes it's too generic and doesn't ask for a response. And sometimes it just misses the mark that the reader (assuming they get to the end…) is left thinking "so what?".
If you're going to invest your time and money in marketing your business then it's essential that you maximise your response with powerful copy. I've recently written an email for my
Copywriting Workshop on 24th September that's already pulled in 18 sales from just ONE email. Many people running workshops struggle to sell more than three or four full price places. So how did I do it? Let me share the formula with you. You can choose whether you come and learn how to put it into practice on the 24th or whether you use this process to simply improve your own copy. Whatever you do, please do let me know how you get on!
Five Simple Steps to writing more powerful copy
1. Focus: establish what you're trying to achieve
2. Find the pain: Use SPIN (situation, problem, implication, need) to get to your client's pain. Argue with yourself or a friend to get to the root of the clients problem and how you solve it. Once you/ they can "feel" the pain in your gut you know you're on to a winner.
3. Create a powerful Headline. I have a formula for creating 13 different types which I share on the copywriting workshop. If you don't have that, write as many different types as you can.
4. Use AIDCA to create a strong structure: Attention (the headline), Interest, Desire, Conviction, Action. I've put plenty of AIDCA explanations on the blog…
5. Review, revise, chop, take a break. Rinse and repeat.
Do let me know how you get on! And if you'd like some feedback on copy you've written – either with or without the help of my winning formula then book a place on the
Copywriting Workshop on the 24th September and you can claim free feedback and two weeks of free email support while you sculpt and tone your winning copy.
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by Fiona Humberstone on August 12, 2009 · 0 comments
Does your writing win you business?
Simple, powerful copywriting techniques to help you sell more
Most websites, leaflets and emails are so badly written that they lose companies business. Can you afford to miss sales opportunities at the moment?
As a business owner you’ll probably spend a lot of your time writing. Wouldn’t it help if you knew some shortcuts to more profitable results?
Gain confidence in your ability and learn how to sell more just through your writing.
Join us for a Copywriting Essentials marketing workshop in Ripley, Surrey on 24th September and you’ll discover how to write to sell. I’ll show you how others get it wrong so that you don’t make the same mistakes, and I’ll give you all the tips, tricks and techniques I employed to get one of my clients a 24% response rate through their direct mail campaign.
You’ll leave with an armful of notes, a head full of ideas and complete confidence that you now have the tools to be able to create writing that sells.
This is one of our most popular live workshops, book now to secure your place! http://www.marvellousworkshops.co.uk/copywriting.html
Here’s how others have benefitted from this workshop:
"Very concise, informative and useful." Aaron Salins, University of Surrey Students Union
"I came away with a stock of superb headlines and the absolute confidence that this weekend I can create a powerful sales letter. Money and time well spent." Stephen Hillier, Hillier Associates
"The '13 headlines' section is potentially life changing!" Matt Pereira
This is my last copywriting workshop of 2009! Make sure you book your place today and get your business ready to gain more business.
Book online at http://www.marvellousworkshops.co.uk/copywriting.html
I look forward to seeing you there! |
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